Yash Datir

The desktop-OS aesthetic is dated and the layout feels cluttered with poor readability against the background image.

It is clear the user is a developer, though the information is presented as a wall of text rather than a professional summary.

There is no project storytelling, only a list of technical keywords and internship titles.

The writing is informal and contains grammatical awkwardness, such as the trailing ellipsis and repetitive phrasing.

While the OS-themed UI is a distinct choice, the execution makes it feel like a generic template rather than a personal brand.

The site is entirely static, missing the opportunity to make the OS-themed interface feel interactive or alive.